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With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The development of the
internet
 has helped to share our comments about the products and services we often use. In my view, these online services
have provide
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have provided
 numerous benefit to the customers.
To begin
 with, before the common use of the
internet
 most people bought
product
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a product
the product
 without knowing about the quality of them.
However
, nowadays via the
internet
 a person can criticize any
product
 or
service
 that they do not
approved
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approve
 of.
Hence
, others can refer those comments before buying a particular
product
 or
service
, which is a major benefit of the
internet
. There are many online forums and discussion pages available
in
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on
 the
internet
 for
this
 task. Another advantage of these online
customer
 communities
are
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is
 it forces the companies to improve their products. In earlier times opinion of a particular
customer
 is insignificant for
the large
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larger
 companies.
Nevertheless
,
this
 new trend has open new methods to put consumer dissatisfaction of a certain good or a
service
 out
on
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to
 the public.
On the other hand
, the online facilities are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 misused by some group of people who what to demote their competitors. Normally these people build
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
 about a particular
product
 or a
service
. Due to the influence of social media these
rumors
gossip (usually a mixture of truth and untruth) passed around by word of mouth
rumours
 spread rapidly by destroying the reputation of that company. Evidently, there are negative side
to
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of
 the
internet
 based
customer
 communities. To recapitulate,
although
, sharing views and opinion on products and services have some
drawbacks specially
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drawbacks, especially
drawbacks especially
 for the producers of them, end users of these things get a number of advantages via those chat forums and even trough social media. Because of
this
, now
customer
 opinion is greatly valued by the multinational companies.
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