Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic Books Radio Television Film Theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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It is inevitable controversial and indisputable fact that technology has improved the way of communicating with the people.There are
variety
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a variety
of ways to connect and provide information
such
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as television, Radio, Films etc. Do you think these ways have completely positive effects on public? Well, let us look into it to get to a concrete decision.
Firstly
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, the best possible means of communication would be through television in short T.V. Television
has been raising
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has raised
the standards of communicating the information visually through the satellites and which helps us to get paramount every
day
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daily
updates on
spot
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the spot
.
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we have many advantages, we do have many disadvantages too. One should consider what is good and what is bad and how to connect
to
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with
positive.
In addition
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, these LCD visual
communication
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communications
had addicting
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were addicting
adolescents and have great effects on vision problems in
future
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the future
.
For example
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- Parents have made toddlers addicted to TV to eat their food quickly, not realizing the
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
in
near future
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the near future
.
Secondly
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, Radio and Films
also
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have
great impact
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a great impact
of connecting with the public with enjoyment. There is a staggering amount in terms of Radio as many people not interested in listening rather watching.
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, it provides extreme entertainment wherever we are.
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- Employees do not have enough time to manage to watch television or to read
newspaper
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newspapers
the newspaper
a newspaper
, so they can adapt to Radio which serves them with all stuff while travelling to office. It has been proven viable.
Films
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The films
also
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made significant changes in
adults
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adult
lifestyles. In fact, many people enjoy movies as a part of their routine and usually
in
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on
at
during
weekends.
But
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Both
films have reached their limit as exposing violent which results in bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of young people. To conclude, I would definitely agree with aforementioned statements that there are many effective ways of communicating with the
people whether
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people, whether
it is good or bad, it depends on every individual to make up self-esteem and take in a positive note and see
good
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the good
in everything.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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