Science can now offer people a life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The breakthroughs of medical field have made it possible
to
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for
humans to have a
long
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longer
life
than they used to.
However
, some believe there are certain concerns regarding
this
situation
dispite
regardless of, in defiance of
despite
dispute
the advantages it provides. In my view, I believe the longer
life
expectancy has made some pressing matters in the society.
To begin
with, the people nowadays live hundred of years and so
on offering
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on, offering
numerous benefits
for
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to
the
world
.
First
and foremost, when these people get older they become
the most experienced
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more experienced
polpulation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
in a country.
Hence
, their knowledge and
life
lessons are crucial for the development of that nation even the
world
.
Moreover
, living a number of years
have let
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has let
human to observe many changes
occured
come to pass
occurred
in the
world
which can be helpful to make right decisions when needed in
such
stuations
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situations
like
world
wars. Considering the unit of
family
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the family
, having grandparents and parents for longer time makes
life
of younger people easier because their advice
help
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helps
young adults to face certain difficult situations
visely
in a wise manner
wisely
.
On the other hand
,
this
many
expresses possibility
may
lead to increase the number of older people in the societies.
Although
medical sector
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the medical sector
was able to increase the
life
expectancey
an expectation
expectancy
, it
did not found
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did not find
has not found
solution
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a solution
the solution
for getting old.
Therefore
,
most old
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older
people could not do their own work alone, they need some help from others. Due to the competitive lifestyle of the young people today they do not have time to
lookafter
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look after
their parents and grandparents.
As a result
,
this
trend leads to generate some social issues.
Furthermore
, people living longer means they need more medical assistance.
Thus
,
government
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the government
need
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needs
to spend more money on welfare of these
people which
Accept comma addition
people, which
can be a huge burden of a nation. To recapitulate, longer
life
expectancy does not always leads to better outcomes, considering the medical and social issue arise
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of
this
development. It is always better to
repect
(usually preceded by 'in') a detail or point
respect
repeat
nature
by letting people to
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by letting people
die when certain age comes.
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