Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.
In recent times,
exorbitant amount
of money is spent on marriage ceremonies. Suggestion
an exorbitant amount
This
has generated public concern towards its adverse effects on the celebrants in terms of financial burden
and the impersonal nature of the party between Suggestion
the financial burden
couple
and the guests.
Lavish wedding ceremonies is usually shouldered solely by the Suggestion
the couple
couples
couple
. As a result
, it causes unnecessary financial pressure which
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pressure, which
require
a considerable amount of time for the Suggestion
requires
newly-weds
to completely recover. someone recently married
newlyweds
newlyweds'
newlywed's
For instance
, my elder brother, who holds various offices in different social organisations, was pressured into hosting an extravagant party to mark his union with his wife. In
the Suggestion
During
next
two years, they (my brother and his wife) spent every last
penny of their income clearing the debt they incurred. These funds would have been channelled to a more productive activity in their lives. This
is just one of the numerous examples of monetary challenges caused by expensive gatherings.
In addition
to that, expensive wedding celebrations create an indifferent atmosphere. There is a high chance of lack of familiarity between the celebrants and the guests. For example
, I was privileged to attend a party organised to celebrate the union of the children of two elite families in Osun State, southwest Nigeria. Almost every notable personality in the society were present. After the program, I overheard the couple
complaining about their unfamiliarity with most of the people present. As their experience shows, large weddings also
cause problems for the bride and grooms.
To conclude, it is agreed that lavish weddings tend to cause problems for the newly wedded couple
. It is advised that proper planning should be done before venturing in to
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