Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some folks argue that spending a lot on making various celebrations

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as wedding and birthday parties is really

unneccessary

not necessary

unnecessary

necessary

, while others claim that these events are important for people and the society. I think these events are a necessity for us, but they should be as simple as possible. There is an

enourmous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

demand on celebration industry. Companies make sophisticated wedding parties for couples and birthday organisations for children. It is obviously attractive for most people,

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however it

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however, it

is really costly for most of them as well.

For instance

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, a one-night wedding might cost the same amount money

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on

a car, a crowded birthday party may send a child to private school for a year.

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, it is considered as unnecessary spending for some people.

On the other hand

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, people can spend huge money to

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events, because they think these days are really special and unique. Couples only marry once, daughters and sons are very important for parents, for those reasons they want to celebrate these days greatly. They would like to enjoy these days with their family and friends.

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, most people do not hesitate to organise

celebrations

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the celebrations

. I believe that there must be a balance between holding a party and its spending. It is clear that people need to socialise and entertain with these events,

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however they

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however, they

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pay the price later.

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, individuals should prefer to make more simple,

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smaller

organisations.

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Paradoxically

,

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the more developed

western world

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more plain events, while developing countries from the East have big events.

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, we should follow habits of

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developing

nations and avoid huge celebrations. In conclusion, even though it might be

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exaggerating

exaggerated

sometimes, celebration is a

fundemental

serving as an essential component

fundamental

need of humankind.

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, we should keep holding

parties but

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the parties, but

the parties but

in a more minimalistic way.