In many places, new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believeing it is more important do protect the countryside and not build new homes there what is your opinion about this ?

Although
the demand for housing is increasing day by day and there are no places in cities to build those houses, some people argue that the
countryside
should be protected and building accommodation in there is not acceptable. I disagree with them. In my opinion, I believe that building house in the rural
area
is essential now.
Firstly
, relocating people in the rural
area
would gradually reduce the density of the air pollution and traffic jam. More and more people are migrating to cities for better future and
hence
the
space
available for construction are already used and
in addition
to
this
, there is even no
space
for tree and field for play. Lots of cars on the road make the traffic condition worse.
This
all can be reduced if people start moving in the peripheral places in the city.
For example
, if people moving into the rural
area
, people can have
space
for living, traffic condition will be better and pollution will be less.
Secondly
, the
countryside
would be developed. Now only in cities all types of facilities are available for that reason people increase rate is higher in cities.
On the other hand
, population in the
countryside
is declining. If people build their home in rural
area
and develop School, college, hospital, workspace there,
then
those places
also
have all the facilities people needed to live a happy life.
For instance
, if a doctor relocate in that place,
then
there will be a good opportunity to create a hospital for the
countryside
people. To conclude, there is no
space
left in cities to build a new house for living, already lots of skyscrapers in there,
as a result
, people need to create their houses in peripheral areas in the city,
however
, it should be planned properly by government.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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