These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.
 Explain why you think this change has happened.
 What are the effects of this change in attitude?

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Nowadays, with
the increasing
production
of
goods
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good
people are
tended
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tending
to
casting
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be cast
their elderly things and adjusting to others
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essay will discuss both sides of
this
problem and consider the economic side as a beneficial one and the pollution as a negative one.
throwing
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Throwing
away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna. Rarely do people realize about
consequences
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the consequences
of
such
actions.
For example
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by casting old things
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there is appearing a need of
production
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producing
new ones for people
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hence
it will bring an
overexplotion
of natural resources.
Furthermore
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throwing away elderly things in
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the ocean
will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna
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The more vegetable life will die out
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the more water animals will suffer from
this
and in the end they will be
finally
eliminated.
Moreover
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considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces
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it is needless to say that
such
extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there.
On the other hand
economical
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economic
benefit should
also
be considered by regarding
this
issue.
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It
is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for
country
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the country
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It
can be easily exemplified by the fact that
majority
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the majority
a majority
of markets sell their
production
and the taxes from these
selling
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sellers
are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers.
For instance
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a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in
UK
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the UK
on the grounds of providing a big campaign of
production
goods. In conclusion
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manufacturing things can be advantageous for government as well as baleful for
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
in general.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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