These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time.  Explain why you think this change has happened.  What are the effects of this change in attitude?

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Nowadays, with

the increasing

production

goods

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good

people are

tended

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tending

casting

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be cast

their elderly things and adjusting to others

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this

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This

essay will discuss both sides of

this

problem and consider the economic side as a beneficial one and the pollution as a negative one.

throwing

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Throwing

away a big amount of things will cause several problems regarding pollution and extinction of flora and fauna. Rarely do people realize about

consequences

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the consequences

such

actions.

For example

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by casting old things

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there is appearing a need of

production

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producing

new ones for people

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hence

it will bring an

overexplotion

of natural resources.

Furthermore

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throwing away elderly things in

ocean

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the ocean

will have a negative effect on condition of flora and fauna

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The more vegetable life will die out

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the more water animals will suffer from

this

and in the end they will be

finally

eliminated.

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considering the fact that fishes are being used as the main food in coastal provinces

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it is needless to say that

such

extinction will exacerbate the situation for those who live there.

On the other hand

economical

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economic

benefit should

also

be considered by regarding

this

issue.

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is evident that manufacturing new goods contributes to the appearance of annual proficiency for

country

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the country

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can be easily exemplified by the fact that

majority

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the majority

a majority

of markets sell their

production

and the taxes from these

selling

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sellers

are going to be in government's charge and governments themselves have an opportunity to improve living standards of dwellers.

For instance

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a recent survey reported that the average level of living has significantly increased within 7 years in

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the UK

on the grounds of providing a big campaign of

production

goods. In conclusion

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manufacturing things can be advantageous for government as well as baleful for

ecosystem

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the ecosystem

in general.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

302 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why you think this change has happened. What are the effects of this change in attitude?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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