Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, many
tourist
Suggestion
tourists
taveling
in different countries. the act of going from one place to another
travelling
Such
as middle east, asia
, and the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
others
parts of not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
global
. Which they are lean to go. Suggestion
globe
the
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The
writter
discuss the both views of advantage and drawback of people go in for rugged places in writes (books or stories or articles or the like) professionally (for pay)
writers
sahara
and Suggestion
the Sahara
Sahara
antartic
.
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Antartic
tourist
visited different places in the world. Where it Suggestion
tourists
could makes
them feel fluky, excitement, relieve stress and more. But there Suggestion
could make
are
people visit in unsafe conditions Suggestion
is
such
as rugged places like sahara
dessert, the world's largest desert (3,500,000 square miles) in northern Africa
Sahara
antartic
, pacific and others. Suggestion
Antartic
such
as new adventures, challenging experience and more for them. They Suggestion
Such
known
that certain places has a wondrous place. Suggestion
are known
have known
knew
sahara
known as a largest the world's largest desert (3,500,000 square miles) in northern Africa
Sahara
dessert
in the world and has arid land with little or no vegetation
desert
a
many animals can be found here. Antartic to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
as
also
has a wondrous lighting weather
here. Accept comma addition
lighting, weather
as
we Suggestion
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seen
in the news. Suggestion
have seen
saw
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
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this
places plural of that
those
are
difficult for Suggestion
is
tourist
to visit here. But more and more tourist
visited this places
. Suggestion
this place
these places
for
a different purposes Suggestion
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tha
it brings them a memorable journey that they made in pointing out something
that
than
there
life.
The of them or themselves
their
benifits
for those financial assistance in time of need
benefits
adeventurous
people it willing to undertake or seeking out new and daring enterprises
adventurous
will brings
them a wondrous experienced, learnings, more stronger, Suggestion
will bring
unfogetable
experience, and a impossible to forget
unforgettable
fullfilment
happiness in a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
thier
entire life
The drawback for of them or themselves
their
them
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them, for
for
example if
they has been Accept comma addition
example, if
experienced
a fear during Suggestion
experiencing
thier
of them or themselves
their
adenture
in some rugged places it could affect the mental health of a person.a wild and exciting undertaking (not necessarily lawful)
adventure
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