Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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tourists

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in different countries.

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people visit in unsafe conditions

such

as rugged places like

sahara

the world's largest desert (3,500,000 square miles) in northern Africa

Sahara

dessert,

antartic

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have known

knew

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