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Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, globalization becomes a worldwide trend in every cor
ners of
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corner
 the world with the expansion of many cultural identities in distinctive nations.
This
 phenomenon could be ascribed to various explanations, exerting both merits and demerits. The chief driving force behind is the more widely open policies in eco
nomy an
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the economy
d immigration of many countries. Thanks to the advanced technology and transportation, it is more assessable for foreign dwellers to migrate and settle down abroad. As many people opined that oth
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other
veloped countries offer themselves with more chances of better education and employment. These immigrants are likely to create their own community and which in turn lead to the multinational and multicultural groups in some nations. To some extent, a huge number of possible impacts on society can be engendered by multiculturalism.
Firstly
, with regards to benefits ,
th
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,
e globalization enables citizens to foster cultural and traditional int
egration which in
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integration, which
 turn rapid the economic growth.
However
, the increase in numbers of different groups living together results in unavoidable conflicts because of the differences and racial discrimination. Proof of
this
 can be seen that, America is a multiracial and multicultural country which welcomes citizens from other nations to migrate and devote their whole life there.
Consequently
, Americans not only make others states admire their ach
ievements but
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achievements, but
also
 raise the ske
pticism of
doubt about the truth of something
scepticism
 their instability
such
 as terrorism or unemployment. In sum, there are several reasons why multiculturalism becomes more prevalent and
this
 trend can have a great influence on both individuals and government. Given the fact that society continues to change,
this
 phenomenon ten
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tends
 remain well into the future
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