In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems

as a result

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of eating too much fast

food

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. It is

therefore

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necessary for government to impose a higher

tax

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on

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kind of

food

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. To what extent do you agree or disagree with

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opinion? Nowadays, people are always on the go and rarely spend time cooking by themselves. In

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case, fast

food

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becomes an important part of their life.

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, the number of people who suffering from diabetes, high cholesterol, or cancer,

etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

as a consequence of overeating fast

food

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are increasing

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is increasing

day by day. Some people think that it is necessary for government to apply heavy taxes on fast

food

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. Personally, I partly agree with

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idea because of the following reasons. On one hand, it cannot be denied that implementing

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a high tax

tax

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on junk

food

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would discourage consumers, especially children, from eating so much it. Clearly, only when they have to pay a big amount of money for the

food

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causing their

health’s

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health

problem, can they stop buying it.

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, they will turn to spend their part time cooking at home to save money. Take Denmark as a telling example, It was one of the

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countries to introduce high

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on fast

food

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such

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as butter, potato chips and many processed foods.

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, the fast

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processing companies would have to face with the threat of bankruptcy because of high

tax

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.

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, the consumers will have less choice of fast

food

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and it leads to the reduction of fast

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in their meals.

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, imposing heavy

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is believed not to be the only way to solve

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problem, other effective methods need to be considered.

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of all, governments should restrict the sale of junk

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or limit advertisement, especially on school campus. Health education is said to be the

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strategy. Not only children need to be aware of the danger of fast

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which causes them

suffer

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to suffer

from many severe diseases

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as: obesity, heat-attack… but their parents

also

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supply nutritious

food

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as well as encourage them to participate in outdoor activities. In conclusion, it is clear that government need to pay more attention

to reduce

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to reducing

the rate of people suffering from sickness caused by fast

food

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.

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, it is up to each individual’s choice of the

food

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he/she wants to eat, they need to care more about their meals and do exercise regularly in order to have a healthier life.