Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should ha e freedom to do anysports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often argued that hazardous sports ought to be prohibited by the authorities,

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others believe that people should be free to partake in any

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. In my opinion,

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allowing individuals to freely take part in any

sport

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has some benefits, I still believe it should be banned to prevent

injuries

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sustained during

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exercise

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, which can cause permanent body damage and

death

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. Those who support

prohibition

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the prohibition

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of risky sports believe that a lot of hazards occur when participating in

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activities

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as mountain biking, swimming and boxing. If the law of the society forbids

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exercise

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,

injuries

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sustained during

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act will be reduced if not prevented.

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,these

injuries

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may cause permanent body damage and even

death

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,head injury usually

occur

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during swimming

exercise

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and has led to the

death

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of many swimmers especially inexperienced ones.

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, banning these activities will reduce the occurrence of accidents and

death

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through dangerous sporting

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exercise

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.

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, opponents of risky

exercise

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claim that allowing individuals to partake in any

sport

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enable

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them to provide for their family and cater for their daily needs

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the fact that they earn their living through

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means.

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,partakers of these activities are mainly youths, so social crimes are decreased drastically since most of them earn a living through

sport

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.

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,boxers earn

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of dollars after each round of boxing.

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, hazardous

activity

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is a kind of employment opportunity. In my opinion,I believe dangerous

exercise

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should be banned owing to the fact that it poses a lot of dangers to the partakers and

expose

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them to

injuries

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,a recent survey revealed that 60% of boxers develop eye problems

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the

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direct trauma to the eyes during the

activity

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. In conclusion,

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other

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others

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vary in their opinion,I believe

government

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the government

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should place a ban on risky

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sport

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sports

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and

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activity

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activities

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because of the dangers involved which may lead to

loss

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the loss

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of body

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parts

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and life.