Compare the advantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
With progress in technology and conventional methods, we have different media of
information
communication as media. Each has its own pros and cons. * Television
Television
has a large viewer base and accessibility for different households and areas. After the introduction of electricity in rural areas, peoples
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people
show
interest in programs telecasted on it. Even the elders or small children deprived of quality education can understand what's going on in the world by watching news, discussions and other programs in their local language. The audio-visual medium can be considered the best source of communication for most Wrong verb form
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people
. However
, television
is not affordable by
certain sections of society. Change preposition
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Besides
it has a negative impact on the younger generation as not all channels show informative content. For higher ratings, certain channels have much content having vulgarity or even fake news and fanatic discussions instilling poison in minds
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the minds
people
. This
way it is harming the growth and development of young minds, at the same time attacking the integrity of our society. * Books
Books
help in inculcating good reading habits among people
. Content published in books
is more reliable than any other media of communication. People
without access to libraries find it difficult to buy them frequently for getting
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to get
information
about a myriad of subjects and topics. With the advancement in digital technology students and even elders have started migrating to Ebooks. For people
who can't read due to
weak eyesight or low literacy books
perhaps might not be the best option. * Theatre Theatre is an excellent medium to communicate information
or message
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messages
welfare
of society. For once Correct article usage
the welfare
people
might find books
boring or Television
too artificial but theatre culture will always prevail in the world. It is one of the most interesting ways to send message
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a message
the message
people
's heart
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this
rat race and busy world, a large number of citizens seldom take out
the time to visit theatres. Change preposition
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Besides
, not all kind
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kinds
information
is suitable to be enacted out through plays.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite