Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and society. Governments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for their work.

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Mobile

Suggestion

The mobile phone

A mobile phone

phone

is one of the greatest inventions in

this

digital world. It has been adopted by maximum people in current society. The mobile

phone

technology has been bringing lots of advantages for us. Some people believe that, the increasing usability of mobile

phone

has

also

some negative impact in our society.

Mobile

Suggestion

The mobile phone

phone

is mainly used for communication, by using mobile device we can communicate with our friends, relatives and colleagues easily. Basically, there are two types of mobile

phone

like feature

phone

and smartphone. The main difference of

this

plural of "this"

these

two model is, you can only talk and send short message service

(

Accept space

(

SMS) by feature

phone

Smartphone

Suggestion

The smartphone

A smartphone

has lots of extra features like internet browsing, playing high resolution games, millions applications for different purposes. It has been observed that, young generation is very much interested on smartphones. They spend lots of time on browsing internet and playing game. They mainly make them busy with

this

device which has a negative impact on their regular study. Students are going for less outdoor sports and activities than previously as they used to. They have more friends in

virtual world

Suggestion

the virtual world

a virtual world

virtual worlds

than the real world. Sometimes they

also

engage in cyber crime activity by using internet on their mobile. Some researcher identified that, the excessive radiation of mobile

phone

is harmful for our health which causes headache and aching in the eyes. There were several cases observed that the radiation causes different different accident in multiple area. Sometimes hospital equipments are malfunctioning due the mobile signal. Even we have seen, we have to keep off our mobile while we are taking off aeroplane to get the right signal from radar stations. In my opinion, there must be some restriction by using different type of mobile for different people. Everybody should not use smartphone, based on the need like study, work, communication people should use smartphone or feature

phone

with valid justification.

This

kind of policy should be introduced by local government so that people can get only benefit from

this

invention,

otherwise

things will become worse specially for young generation. In conclusion, every invention is invented for mankind. It is our responsibility how we get maximum benefit from all the invention. Our awareness, proper using and understanding can only help us to avoid the harmful effects of mobile

phone

to our society.

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