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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accommodation #officer #departure #date #information
Dear Sir, The reason
of
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 writing you
this
 letter is to inform you about the short course that I would pursue and to get informed about boarding and lodging.
Acutually
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Actually
, the course I got admission within is a certification in Public Health which later on could be
coverted
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converted
 into a degree program. Aside,
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this
 the expected arrival date at London
Heathorow
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Heathrow
 Airport is the 8th of August, 2019; by flight number EK-601
that is
 the Emirates Airline about 3pm the afternoon.
However
, in the nick of
time
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 there are some important
accomadation
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accommodation
 needs that must be discussed prior to
the
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arrival. The
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accommodation
that is
 desirable is
separate
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 studio apartment or room with some basic
facilites
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facilities
 those are; a study table with lamp, a room refrigerator, with
small
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 kitchen and attached bath.
Likewise
, the apartment must be near to the downtown or the university
atleast
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at least
, it would make life
alot
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a lot
 easier.
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Moreover
, there is a need to know about the possible distance that would have the
accomodation
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accommodation
 in case to manage the transportation. Does the college have a bus stop
near
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by
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it? Or a train station if not how far it is in
kilometers
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 from the college?
This
 basic bit of information would help to manage time and cost. I will be really grateful
of
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 you, to guide me through all my queries. Yours
Sincerly
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Sincerely
, Sam
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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