You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir, The reason
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writing you
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letter is to inform you about the short course that I would pursue and to get informed about boarding and lodging.
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, the course I got admission within is a certification in Public Health which later on could be
coverted
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into a degree program. Aside,
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the expected arrival date at London
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Airport is the 8th of August, 2019; by flight number EK-601
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the Emirates Airline about 3pm the afternoon.
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, in the nick of
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there are some important
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needs that must be discussed prior to
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arrival. The
accomdation
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desirable is
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studio apartment or room with some basic
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those are; a study table with lamp, a room refrigerator, with
small
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kitchen and attached bath.
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, the apartment must be near to the downtown or the university
atleast
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, it would make life
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easier.
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, there is a need to know about the possible distance that would have the
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in case to manage the transportation. Does the college have a bus stop
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by
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it? Or a train station if not how far it is in
kilometers
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from the college?
This
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basic bit of information would help to manage time and cost. I will be really grateful
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you, to guide me through all my queries. Yours
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, Sam

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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