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Internet has transform the way information is shared and consumed.but it is also create the problem which did not exist before. What are the most serious problem associated with this and what solution can you suggest.

#internet #information
Nowadays,
internet
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the internet
 plays an essential role in every person's
life
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life, such
such
 as work purposes
,
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,
study purposes and so on. Even
,
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,
the
internet
is changed
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has changed
is changing
changes
 the way of sharing and consuming
information
.
However
, the uses of
internet
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the internet
 are very
beneficial but
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beneficial, but
 it
cause
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causes
 many problems for
community
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the community
communities
. I will justify the
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 of
this
 concern in the upcoming paragraphs with plausible solutions. To commence with, gone were
days
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the days
 when people shared and consumed
information
 with
letters but
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letters, but
 with the passage of time people attracts towards the
internet
 because it is very easy and fast way to get and send
information
 but in
this
technology
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technological
 era the hackers are
also
inclining
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inclined
 to misuse of masses personal
information
 as well as send the wrong
information
 which directly distracts to individuals.
Moreover
, these days isolation is increasing
between
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among
 families and children due to the always indulge with social sites
such
 as
whtsapp
,
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,
facebook
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Facebook
.
Therefore
, they separate with each other. No problem is big or small if it will be
solve
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solved
 by
right step
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right, step
 with
right spirit
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the right spirit
a right spirit
.
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.
similarly
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Similarly
, there
are
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is
 some way to tackle
this
 problem.
Firstly
, people should less
intrected
act together or towards others or with others
interacted
interested
 with social sites and they have to spend more time
withe
expresses the means used
with
 their family and children as much they can.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
 should create a particular software and sites which will be keep person '
s
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is'
 personal data with safety so no one can
hace
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
 it.
Furthermore
, the
internet
 facility is cheaper and every person
use
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uses
this
 for their own
purpose while
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purpose, while
 some use it for misuse so,
high
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higher
 authorities should
increased
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increase
 the price of data packs as well as government should punish the hackers strictly. To conclude, in
contamporary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
 era
internet
 is need of every
individuals but
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individual, but
individual but
 to some extend it has limited uses and masses should aware about its
seriuos
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
series
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 which
cause
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caused
 by
highly
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high
 usage of
internet
.
Submitted by Navneet kaur on

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