Some people think that books should be stopped in schools and that videos, computers and films should be used instead. To what extent do you agree?

The system of learning in educational institution is changing and
this
has aroused some concerns about the conventional
method
of using books, which is believed to be stopped, while encouraging usage of e-learning methods. My opinion on
this
would be that both methods should be implemented.
Firstly
, technological devices used in learning are expensive to acquire and maintain in some learning institutions.
This
is as seen in the educational budgets in
middle
Suggestion
the middle
and
low
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lower
class schools, which are usually not sufficient to purchase the electronic devices and even when they are available, the funds for maintaining these e-learning gadgets are somewhat not enough.
Books
Accept comma addition
Books, on
on the other hand
are cheaper in terms of acquisition and maintenance. So,
although
the
use
of videos, films and computers are encouraged for
use
in learning, books should not be discarded because of the cost implications.
Secondly
, e-learning requires skill. In
this
case, the students are expected to have the technical-know-how of using and operating the machines involved in learning.
This
might
otherwise
impair learning in some people who are yet to have acquired the necessary professional knowledge of handling the devices.
This
is
in contrast
to the conventional
method
of learning, which does not need any pre-handling knowledge. So, in as much as electronic learning is
on
Suggestion
in
high demand, traditional
method
should
also
be embraced to ensure that everyone is carried along. Conclusively, following the current changes in technology, some people believe that technological advancement should as well be effected in the system of learning while ending the
use
of paper prints. But, I believe that books should be retained in schools because of its financial benefits and
method
of
use
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