All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

A law allowing Electric
cars
to replace all
carbon emitting
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vehicles should be introduced,
this
I agree with in its entirety. It is already a fact based on research carried out over the years that
carbon emitting
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cars
contribute in no small way to environmental/air pollution. The air we breathe in continues to be unsafe for plants and animals as long as we keep making
use
of unclean
energy
.
However
, the advent of modern technology has birthed the
use
of clean
energy
with the introduction of electric
cars
and
solar powered
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engines.
This
modern equipment is powered by plugging the vehicles with electric cables and allowing them to charge. No fuel is required to power the equipment
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the
diesel powered
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vehicles that burn fuel and emit carbon monoxide which is harmful to living things. Meanwhile, the electric
cars
are quite expensive compared to the old technology.
This
is because it is yet to be generally accepted the world over, especially in Africa whose inhabitants
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on imported technology to survive. It is hoped that in the next few years, financial constraints will become less of a burden on Africans and the world
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embrace
this
alternative, so people will live happier and healthier lives.
Furthermore
, we all need to encourage the
use
of clean
energy
even in our homes. It is common knowledge that people have lost their lives
due to
the
use
of
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fuel generators to power household appliances.
Lastly
, the importance of clean
energy
cannot be overemphasized. It is like heaven, to imagine a moving car that goes from one point to another without the usual dark smoke that trails
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faulty engine or the thick white smoke that slowly diffuses into the atmosphere
due to
too much or wrong engine oil.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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