All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
A law allowing Electric
cars
to replace all carbon emitting
vehicles should be introduced, Add a hyphen
carbon-emitting
this
I agree with in its entirety. It is already a fact based on research carried out over the years that carbon emitting
Add a hyphen
carbon-emitting
cars
contribute in no small way to environmental/air pollution. The air we breathe in continues to be unsafe for plants and animals as long as we keep making use
of unclean energy
. However
, the advent of modern technology has birthed the use
of clean energy
with the introduction of electric cars
and solar powered
engines. Add a hyphen
solar-powered
This
modern equipment is powered by plugging the vehicles with electric cables and allowing them to charge. No fuel is required to power the equipment unlike
the Add the comma(s)
, unlike
diesel powered
vehicles that burn fuel and emit carbon monoxide which is harmful to living things. Meanwhile, the electric Add a hyphen
diesel-powered
cars
are quite expensive compared to the old technology. This
is because it is yet to be generally accepted the world over, especially in Africa whose inhabitants depends
on imported technology to survive. It is hoped that in the next few years, financial constraints will become less of a burden on Africans and the world Correct subject-verb agreement
depend
would
embrace Wrong verb form
will
this
alternative, so people will live happier and healthier lives. Furthermore
, we all need to encourage the use
of clean energy
even in our homes. It is common knowledge that people have lost their lives due to
the use
of smoke emitting
fuel generators to power household appliances. Add a hyphen
smoke-emitting
Lastly
, the importance of clean energy
cannot be overemphasized. It is like heaven, to imagine a moving car that goes from one point to another without the usual dark smoke that trails a
faulty engine or the thick white smoke that slowly diffuses into the atmosphere Change preposition
from a
due to
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite