The gap between rich and the poor is increasing wide as rich people become richer and poor people grew poor what problem could this situation cause ? what are the solution to address those problem?

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is implicit that there is an enormous

gab

a conspicuous disparity or difference as between two figures

gap

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between affluent and impoverished people is ample more and more as some children are born in high societies

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hence

become more richer

however

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some are born in poor families

then

become poor.

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has become a disquieting problem so there are several factors responsible for

this

problem which I would like to explicate in

this

essay and discuss some possible repercussion

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There are multifarious

reason

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reasons

of points

endors

be behind; approve of

endorse

endorsed

my views

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One of the most prominent reason is that prosperous people become richer because they have plenty of Penny and can do anything including

education

, Medical and have luxurious Lifestyle

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Richer attain higher

education

and easy obtain the job or can start their own business.

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the other hand

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poor people do not have much money so they do not

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their desires and cannot avail good

education

, often lower strata of society is indulge in crime and commit distinct delinquencies

such

as robbery

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theft and kidnapping

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but still remain poor and cannot give satisfaction to the family. As per prevailing

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there are some solutions to mitigate

this

Grave situation

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Firstly

, bureaucrats

has had provide

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is providing

provides

provided

has provided

equal opportunities to both societies.

education

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Education

must be provided to poor people so that they can get

ideal job

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the ideal job

an ideal job

along with the telephone figure salary

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Both people should have similar rights and must follow all rules and regulations so poverty can be declined and poor people do not feel isolated.

legal

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Legal

bodies should provide free

education

and nutritious diet

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poor kids at school so that

this

scourge can be

ameliorate

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ameliorated

immediately from

further

deteriorating

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It can be retreated that there are numbers of factors and some possible solutions of

this

phenomenon. Government should take some steps and implement stringent law in all countries

throught

all the way through

throughout

through

the world

therefore

, all

kind

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kinds

of people can take

advantages

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advantage

of it.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

320 words

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