Some countries spend lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?Easier

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Nowdays
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Nowadays
, many
country
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countries
are promoting
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biCycle
a wheeled vehicle that has two wheels and is moved by foot pedals
bicycle
uses by spending more money to make it easier.
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is because
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bicycle
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the bicycle
a bicycle
is
a
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an
eco-friendly to
environent
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the environment
environment
.
Yes it
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Yes, it
is the best solution to
traffic
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congestion
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.
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encountering
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is encountering
encounters
the advantages of
bicycle
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it is an eco-friendly. As
bicycle
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don’t require
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doesn’t require
fuel to work where they will be huge saving on fuel
product
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produced
.
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uses of
bicycle
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reduce the problem of pollution cause
bicycle
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don’t produce any gases
in contrast
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it is
eco
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Eco
friendly.
Secondly
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bicycle
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occupy
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occupies
less space
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
that of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
vehicle which can be
best solution
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the best solution
for the
traffic
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congestion
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.
For example
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4
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bicycle
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bicycles
can easily pass in the space of
1 car
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the 1 car
. Looking
to
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for
into
at
the road
bicycle
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need comparatively less space
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then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
other vehicle
furthermore
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problem related to
traffic
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congestion
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can be reduce
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can be reduced
. In conclusion uses of
bicycle
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is the best solution of
traffic
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congestion
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and
also
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eco-friendly

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