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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree.

#computers #languages #waste #time
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There is a robust argument that computers can efficiently and
precisely do
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precisely does
language
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 conversions;
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, mastering
overseas
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an overseas language
language
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 is no longer required with
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 advancement. I completely disagree with the notion.
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 essay will deeply
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consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
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 the argument and render the best verdict out of it.
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, overseas
languages broaden
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languages, broaden
 a person’s horizon because
language
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 represents the culture of a country.
Traveling
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Travelling
 has remarkably increased these days and daily people are encountered with
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a wide range
 of languages.
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,
language
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 barrier refrains a person from indulging into a specific culture. A
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briefly giving the gist of something
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 example proclaiming
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; In Germany, people around tend to feel home sick due to constraint put up
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with
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language
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the language
 of a country resulting in boredom rather than enjoyment.
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, without the knowledge of a local
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 one cannot expand his social circle and here,
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the role
 of computer for
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from
 the real world.
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, knowledge of foreign languages is imperative in multiple businesses. These-days trade has no boundaries as expanding the world over,
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 to compete with the international business, being multilingual is of utmost importance for an effective customer and company relationship. For illustration, in Pakistan, thousands of foreigners pay visit to tourist places every year, which requires spontaneous verbal skills and it completely extirpates the efficiency of computers.
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, for communication in business, there is no room for translation and individuals must have proficiency in
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language
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the language
languages
 in order to guide and explain properly.
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, in the world outside the offices where computers are not readily available for translating
language
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 within
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a blink
 of
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an eye
, bring more problem for those individuals who are not familiar with the foreign
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. To conclude,
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 essay argued why considering foreign linguistics is a waste of time is preposterous. I completely disagree with the statement, in
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actuality
 it is
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an investment
the investment
 of time because it results in gaining enormous experience and it flourishes business.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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