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Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while other believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Augmentation of
crime
 rate in most part of the world is one of the contentious issue at the moment.
Although
, it is thought by many that barraging
crime
 is
sole responsibility
Suggestion
the sole responsibility
 of the state, while others advocate that people had better opt self-prevention techniques.
However
, self-protection
begets
 benefits in terms of their safety, I believe that; it is better if
government
take
Suggestion
takes
 crucial steps for barding
crime
 in the
society
. On the one hand, if people
remains
Suggestion
remain
 more vigilant in discharging their duties towards
society
 as
whole
Suggestion
a whole
, and play
effective role
Suggestion
an effective role
 by keeping an eye on suspicious activities around them, definitely it will provide a short term solution to keep them safe.
For instance
, In USA
government
 has developed a 24/7 emergency response system, where individuals lodge complaint against ongoing
crime
, when they find any suspect.
As a result
, a drop in
crime
 rate is observed.
However
, I believe that
this
 is not the solution to the actual problem because a
lay man
someone who is not a clergyman or a professional person
layman
 might get caught in a life threatening situation because of lack of training and expertise in dealing with a particular situation.
on
Suggestion
On
 the other hand,
effective role
Suggestion
the effective role
 of law and enforcement agencies, and proper implementation of
legislation
Suggestion
the legislation
 is thought to reduce the number of
crime
 and criminals in the
society
, which works under the supervision of
government
. A short succinct example proclaiming
this
 case, a person who found allegedly guilty in a serious
crime
 should be sentenced to jail without even thinking twice. I believe
this
 method is preferable because it will help reduce
crime
 and enable people to live in
peaceful environment
Suggestion
a peaceful environment
. Resolving the essay on my opinion, I presume that;
although
 self-prevention might help people get off the criminals and
crime
 activities, bu
t
Suggestion
the government
government
 has better ought to protect
society
 by any m
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