Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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transport
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will face more problem in getting basic necessities of life as compared to resolving road concerns.
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transport
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