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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

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These
days everyone
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days, everyone
 has at least
one
 account on social media. So, some people might
do not
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do, not
 trust these websites when they are sharing some personal information because of some issues. While others do not even think about these risks and just enjoy in the benefits of the social media.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
In
Suggestion
On
one
 hand, like everything in
this
life
 there are advantages and disadvantages. But
one
 of the advantages of the social media is the communication. Some people now communicate via social media more than in the real
life
.
That is
 because some people do not have a time to meet each other in the real
life
.
In
Suggestion
On
 the other hand, using social media and publishing
life
 details might be dangerous for some people especially for young people. To illustrate, research has made in Aleppo University that
one
 out ten people getting
hack
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hacked
 every day on their accounts and most of them are young, and that sometimes leads the hackers to
threating
pose a threat to; present a danger to
threaten
threatening
 the victim and asking for money to get their accounts back.
This
 proves clearly that the negatives are stronger than the positives of the social media websites. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both point views, I believe that the social media disadvantages outweighed the advantages.
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