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Some people think that managerial posts in private companies and in government are more suitable for men. Others think that given the opportunity women can be successful managers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In today’s modern era, some people believe that women are well educated and talented
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 They can lead many organizations successfully
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 They are pushing organisations to the new height of success. While
on the other hand
, some people think that men have more potential than women. They can balance their work-life more well. We will
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 both views here. And
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 will give my opinion.
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, people who support women argue that in
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everything that exists anywhere
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 women are more educated than men. In every
universitiy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
 the ratio of women is more than men. They
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 have innate abilities to make decisions. Now a days, they are
also
 supporting their families to earn bread and butter. So, they should be provided with the
opportunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 of promotion and lead the organization. They must provide equal rights of men in their careers.
On the other hand
 people who oppose the idea believe that men struggled hard to
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 their families. Women does job only to pass their time, as soon as they got married they quit their jobs. Company bear loss because they spend
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a huge amount
huge amounts
 on the selection and training of
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new employees
a new employee
the new employee
 to
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put in effect
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 that position. In my opinion, both male and female should provide the equal rights of being promoted. They both can lead the organization towards success.

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