In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for country, while other believe that government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In
this
world there
Accept comma addition
world, there
is an inequality between the higher strata of society and the poor.
This
is mainly because of the skills and its rewards that these people have that separates them. Some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
that there should be a regulating policy to limit the
income
of some high earning officials and some don't. While both the aspects may have some merits, in my view, people should have their own authority over their salaries and
government
should set up some non
government
organisations for them to donate out of their own free will. High ranking officials and people with executive jobs deserve high salaries due to the fact their job responsibilities
entails
Suggestion
entail
them to do
humonguous amount
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a humongous amount
humongous amount
the humongous amount
humungous amount
of nerve racking and stress related tasks and so the sky high monetary benefits justify them. Receiving
such
increasing salaries
also
helps them to take small vacations throughout the year so that they resume their jobs with a sense of satisfaction and perform them whole heartedly. When
such
officials spend, it indirectly benefits the economy by boosting its Gross Domestic Product.
However
, by imposing a ceiling on
the high
Suggestion
higher
salaried employees, the
government
tries to reduce the
income
disparities between the rich and those living in penury. The
government
is able to do more non-profit undertakings to help the economy. In
desparate
arising from or marked by despair or loss of hope
desperate
times, the extra
income
can be a real life saver to help them adjust the balance of payments. Following a ceiling approach may be harmful because
then
the officials may try to show false earnings and save them in offshore accounts.
Transfering
Suggestion
Transferring
the extra
income
in the names of their relatives so that the
government
cannot touch it,
for instance
is one way to evade
government
scrutiny.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • economic growth
  • motivation
  • talent acquisition
  • consumer spending
  • tax revenue
  • redistributing wealth
  • market forces
  • income disparity
  • social stability
  • freedom of choice
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