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More and more parents allow their children to play on computer and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is getting more popular when adults permit children to use various gadgets for playing
games extending
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games, extending
 their technical abilities in
such
 way. It could cause some troubles with decreasing of communication skills, but I believe that development of new competences is more beneficial for youngsters. Children who are involved in playing computer games could be less socialized
then
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than
 those who dedicate more time being outside. It is crucial for young people to develop their communication skills for success in future life and lower interaction with friends could have perilous effects on them, but
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the harmful influence
 could be reduced by strict time management
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for
of
 adults.
For instance
, some of my schoolmates met a lot of new friends in real life after playing virtual games together just one hour per day. Technical skills are very important for all people in
modern world
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the modern world
, especially for children. The most useful competence nowadays is
ability
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able
 to find relevant information
in
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from
 reliable sources. Playing computer games allows youngsters to be more familiar with technical opportunities and issues as well.
For example
, my niece who used to play on her tablet is more aware about growing cyber dangers and
also
, she always tries to check information to be sure everything is right.
That is
 why it is useful to help children to learn cutting-edge technology even by playing.
Although
 there are some weak sides of spending time playing on
computer
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the computer
 like lack of communication, its amount could be controlled by parents. Benefits which could be received by youngsters from using innovative technology gives them bigger awareness and confidence.
That is
 why
advantages
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the advantages
 of playing
on
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with
 gadgets outweigh any drawbacks.
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