Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?
Currently many
people tend to Accept comma addition
Currently, many
work
for themselves like rather than being an employee. In my view, I believe that there is a dark side of being self-employed. Use synonyms
This
essay will examine the benefit and drawback of working on their own Linking Words
business
.
To Use synonyms
beginning
with reason to the argument, there are two main points that make people want to Suggestion
begin
work
for their own. As a Use synonyms
first
point, it’s difficult to find a good job with that well paid in a big Linking Words
company
and there are many requirements Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
work
experience and high degree of education. Use synonyms
Secondly
, people or young generation Linking Words
give
a value on freedom, working on their Suggestion
gives
business
is the answer. Use synonyms
For example
, they don’t have to follow many rules and time schedule in the organization. Most of the adolescence Linking Words
prefer
working late at night rather than going to Suggestion
prefers
work
early in the morning and get off time at 5:30 PM. They think that creates Use synonyms
on
enterprise might suit them.
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On the other hand
, there are many drawbacks of being self-employed. Linking Words
First
and foremost, people who choose to create a Linking Words
business
or enterprise need a capital investment or Use synonyms
money
while some of them that not ready might get stuck with it. Use synonyms
Next
, People need to take the race on Linking Words
high rate
of economic competition that could make the Suggestion
a high rate
company
or start up Use synonyms
fell
at Suggestion
falling
anytime
. When the Suggestion
any time
company
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fail
, it means that all Suggestion
fails
money
that has been invested were gone and it hard to grow up again. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, unstable income might be one of the disadvantages Linking Words
on
people Suggestion
of
who
owning a objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
company
due to the reason that no one can guarantee that they will receive the same amount of Use synonyms
money
in every month while working in the organization can guarantee on that. It’s true that having own Use synonyms
business
can earn more income or can Use synonyms
rich
over one night but it’s still not stable. Stationary the limits within which something can be effective
reach
company
, for instant, can get high profit only Use synonyms
on
season like back to school while used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
other
month might get only little amount of any of various alternatives; some other
another
money
.
To conclude, There are several Use synonyms
benefit
and Suggestion
benefits
also
Linking Words
numerous drawback
of being Suggestion
the numerous drawback
numerous drawbacks
an
self employed. Many people choose to Suggestion
a
work
at on their Use synonyms
business
. Use synonyms
However
, it might Linking Words
be wrong decision
since there are many problems that the owner need to face with and get a little chance of success.Suggestion
be a wrong decision
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