The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table illustrates how many male and female workers were employed in British and Walsh factories from the year 1851 to 1901. In general, the amount of male and female labours experienced
downward trend
Suggestion
a downward trend
through out
all the way through
throughout
the
period
, but the
number
of factories significantly increased with a fluctuating trend. At the beginning of the
period
, there was nearly half a million of male (287,100) and female (190,000) employees in 225 British and Walsh factories
.
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.
In contrast
, these figures declined
into
Suggestion
in
total 61,000
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total, 61,000
at the end of the
period
,
however
, the
number
of factories increased almost
three fold
three times as great or many
threefold
to 600. In 1861, the amount of male workers rate slightly less than females, it was 131,780 males and 160,000 females in 227 factories in the given countries. After a decade, both male
(
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(
80,123) and female
(
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(
60,000) less than the previous
period
, but the rate of factories increased to 622. In 1881 and 1891, the
number
of male
worker
Suggestion
workers
declined from 76,132 to 65,000 as well as females 50,000 to 40,000 in the factories.
In addition
, the
number
of factories in England and Wales were
also
downward trend
Suggestion
a downward trend
from 722 to 625.
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