When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. Suc In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterize a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Succes
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Success
never comes overnight.It takes dedication
,
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,
commitment and
hardwork
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hard work
to attain it. According to me, it is not rich or famous people who are successful rather the successful people turn out to be rich and famous. There are several qualities that could be attributed to a successful person.
Firstly people
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Firstly, people
who
takes
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take
up the lessons from the failure are found to be more
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
than anyone. There could be no better than Edison for
this
statement. Edison before he invented the light bulb failed several times. But Edison remained undaunted by failures.
Everytime
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Every time
he failed he learnt not to repeat the same mistake again. Yet another character of successful people
are
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is
the way they schedule time.
Triumphants
like Mark Zuckerberg, Jeff
bezos
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Bezos
have a well organised life style. They work on making the best use of every day
,
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,
thus
making profit out of every minute they have. It is several baby steps that accounts to a greater success.
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