Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

These days online shopping became very popular. So, some people prefer to buy from the
internet
, while others believe that it is not safe.
This
essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.
In
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On
one hand, time is important for everyone, So some people do not have the time to do shopping from the shops and the stores.
For example
, most shops nowadays close at eight
o'clock while
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o'clock, while
online stores are open in every time and in every day. So,
thats
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that's
why some people think that buying from the
internet
is the best.
On the other hand
, the
internet
has spread a lot in the
last
years. And many of
websites
and online stores are available today. But one research has made in Maastricht University about the
fakes
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fake
websites
. They found that from ten regular online
websites
store there is one irregular online shop. These fake
websites
might steal the credit
cards
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card
information if someone bought from them.
Hence
the belief that online shops are not safe.
In
addition 80
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addition, 80
% of USA people use the
internet
to buy most of the things they need without thinking of whether is it safe or not. To illustrate, they buy from the known
websites
such
as Amazon and
Bool
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Book
.
This
proves clearly that most of the people trust to buy from the
internet
. In conclusion, after a careful analysis of both point view I believe that the positives of online shopping outweighed the negatives.

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