Task 2: Parents give more freedom to their children nowadays than they do in the past. Is this a negative or positive development. Answer with reasons and personal experiences......

Generally, today's parents

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increasingly see

to the liberation of their kids in terms of expressing their likes and dislikes.

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, in my opinion, is a highly constructive development as it has resulted into numerous positive impact

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as their ability to make crucial decisions among others.

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with, freedom brings about beneficial growth in the lives of youths. One of the benefits is their capability in making life choices at very tender ages.

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, children nowadays are very knowledgeable and coupled with a limitation to confinement make them altogether exposed to hypothetical situations, thereby enabling them to take favourable future decisions.

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to the past, family elders and parents are usually saddled with the responsibilities of making choices for the younger ones whereby they had no option but to accept decisions made without recourse.

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, my mom once told me that her father decided for her to be a teacher

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, whereas she

wanted to be a nurse.

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, children who have free hand are able to socialize and mingle well amongst their peers as well as people outside of their peers without being timid.

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, liberating the youths from unnecessary restriction helps them interact freely and wholeheartedly without holding themselves back

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enabling children to speak up for themselves in all

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situations, therefore,

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, helping in reducing child oppression and abuse. To illustrate

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, a

secondaary

being of second rank or importance or value; not direct or immediate

secondary

school student, who lives in my neighbourhood

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was bold enough to file a case against her school teacher who sexually assaulted her. To sum up,

youth freedom

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youth, freedom

today, unlike in the past has helped groom positive developmental features in children particularly, features

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as the initiative to make right choices along with the ability to socialize and mingle

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are a few of the various positivity that can emanate.

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of the continuous reduction in air transportation costs, countries all over the world are welcoming visitors to their territories.

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, in my opinion, will be highly beneficial to the

host

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country

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as it will enhance their international image as well as bring about additional revenue.

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, the harm that may emanate from

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an influx of people cannot be ignored. Admittedly, several

harm

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harms

and damaging repercussions could come along allowing globetrotters on the soil of a

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, it can be an avenue for illicit and illegal transaction of businesses and conveyance of goods which could cause an increase in crime rate in the

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country

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tourism

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could attract terrorists and other dangerous personalities into a

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country thereby

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country, thereby

threatening the safety and security of both nationals and non- nationals. Contrarily, benefits that accrue to hospitable cities are not

farfetched

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far fetched

. One of

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is the creation of additional revenue for the

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country

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For

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tourism

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has proven to be a lucrative business over the years, nations around the world strive to invest in

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line of business so they can increase their national revenue.

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,

tourism

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is usually a medium that helps fast track developmental growth in

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nations.

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, countries who welcome

globetrotters

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globe trotters

are given international recognition as they rank high on the list of best tourist cities

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adding positively to their image.

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, Dubai is one of the well known tourist cities which has magnificent structures that attract millions of people yearly

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contributing immensely to the national income

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To sum up, even though

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positive international image and wealth creation are a few of the various merits of increased

tourism

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, the side-effects,

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as

influx

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the influx

an influx

of terrorists and the smuggle of unlicensed goods are demerits that should be considered.