Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give ur opinion.

It is irrefutable that bad situations happen to man in life. As
such
, it is argued that occurrences
such
as lack of money and unpleasant working conditions should either be embraced or rejected by proffering solutions to improve them. The subsequent paragraphs shall discuss both views and substantiate my stance. Foremost,
unwelcomed
not welcome; not giving pleasure or received with pleasure
unwelcome
situations come into play owing to illiteracy, negative mindset, poor cognitive development among others with
resultant effect
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the resultant effect
of unemployment, meagre amount in
job offer
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the job offer
and sometimes redundancy. The occurrence of these cases
are seen
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is seen
as life trials, or destiny, that are gladly accepted without seeking effective measures of averting them. On the long run, living from hand to mouth becomes the order of the day, making them less impactful in the generation. South Africans,
for
instance are
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instance, are
known to be lazy and
complacence
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complacent
, which in turn makes them stagnant and seek
livelihood
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a livelihood
from the foreign successful ones. On the flip side, striving to improve situations that aren't befitting tend to indicate a positive mindset.
Hardwork
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Hard work
, determination, acquiring more educational qualifications, becoming
skillful
having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude
skilful
in a chosen profession
are
Suggestion
is
steps taken in changing bad situations which will propel an individual in seeking well
renumerated
receiving or eligible for compensation
remunerated
jobs and becoming successful. Mark Zuckerberg was a school dropout,
however
, he made efforts to become successful and fulfilling his goals. At present, he is regarded as the founder of Facebook, the most widely used social
service
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services
. In my view, seeking viable measures to avert unwanted situations propel a person with goals and aspirations which are driven by positivity and determination. To conclude, accepting bad situations
are regarded
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is regarded
as temporary trials and hope for the future,
nonetheless
, proffering ways to
such
cases, project an individual to success, wealth and a brighter future, which I greatly subscribe to.
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