Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undeniably, Governments are responsible for uplifting the standard of living of its

nationlists

devotion to the interests or culture of a particular nation including promoting the interests of one country over those of others

nationalist

. It is often argued that government should spend the money in order to improve public facilities rather than in the arts.

However

, I do partially agree with

this

statement and points related to

this

will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, Investments made by

Government

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the Government

in the field of arts

have following

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were following

are following

merits. If

state

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the state

will put efforts to construct an academy where

public

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the public

will be taught multiple skills, it will be quite beneficial for talented population. To be more precise, if there will be an institution where people can learn dance, music or

such

other things.

it

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It

will help them to showcase the talent in front of others and they can

also

make their futures in that. To quote an example, in India"s capital New Delhi, Government has opened number of

such

academies at affordable fees which helps talented individuals to come up and learn

furthur

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

. It brings a ray of hope to those who cannot afford expensive academies.

However

, it

will be not be

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won't be

will not be

a wise decision if

Government

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the Government

will spend

maximum amount

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the maximum amount

in

arts

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the arts

.

Instead

, they should invest more in public services.

Firstly

, investment should be made in building up more recreational centres.

This

is because, there people of all ages can spend their leisure time in productive activities.

Also

,

Government

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the Government

needs to construct more parks with

number

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a number

of facilities. It means that parks must have

swings

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swung

for children, an airy room for yoga and other exercises, safe drinking water and sanitation facilities. To paradigm, in Punjab's

City Ludhiana

Accept comma addition

City, Ludhiana

, there are

number

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a number

of Government maintained parks

such

as Rakh Bagh, Rose Garden with all

such

facilities. To sum up, it is reiterated that

Government

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the Government

should invest more in public services rather than in the arts, as its advantages outweigh the benefits provided by investing in the music or theatre.