Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. They are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

modern world, every nation

want

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wants

to reach

on

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to

the moon and mars.

However some

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However, some

people opine that it is better to

spent

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spend

money on other things

insted

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of space exploration. I certainly agree with

this

notion which

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

will discuss in the following paragraph.

To begin

with, it

can not

can not

cannot

be denied that we are living in the era of technology where few countries like china and

america

North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776

America

has

reched

reach a destination, either real or abstract

reached

raced

retched

to the moon and they are

also

leading countries in terms of space exploration as well.

However

,

it is a

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it is also a

also

fact that there are

number

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a number

of countries in the world which are very poor and in some areas of these countries people are starving for food and water so it is more ethical to spend money on

such

countries and area.

For example

, in my country India large number of

pople

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peoples'

people

peoples

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lives in below poverty which means they don’t have enough food to eat and

also

they

can not

can not

cannot

access good medical facilities as well.

Furthermore

, government

spend

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spends

money on basic

needs it

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needs, it

helps to nation to grow in

everyfield

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every field

.

For instance

, if peoples are more educated and

physical

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physically

fit

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fitter

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

they can work hard for

country

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the country

and helps to increase productivity of

country

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the country

To conclude, it is a fact that to compete with other

nations it

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nations, it

is very necessary to top in every

field but

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field, but

basic needs

is

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are

more important than any other things as we are humans and to be

physical

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physically

fit and educated its our

first

priority

any thing

an indefinite thing

anything

else.