Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

It is indeed a fact that digital revolution has transformed the lives of billions of people around the globe by changing the way they learn

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work and communicate. It is true that being a

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to buy a gadget of a renowned brand give customers a sense of enjoyment of having it before others.

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, I believe, there are some demerits of

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notion of purchasing similar electronic product as it

is squandering of

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is squandering

money and

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deleterious for

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the environment

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Unwanted

products

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possibly end

up in landfills or in oceans. Toxic pollutants produced from a factory

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injurious to both people and the environment.

As demand and supply

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As supply and demand

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properly related in size or degree or other measurable characteristics; usually followed by 'to'

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proportionate

to each other.By purchasing new devices, individuals discard the old items into

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the trash

, which eventually ends up in a landfill site. Landfill sites are full of non-recyclable and toxic matter that can harm flora and fauna;

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, the more amount of careless disposing of

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the components

leads to a disturbing fact of destroying

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the eco - system

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, according to the Times survey report, around 90 per cent of animals, habitat is affected by the dumping grounds.

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the garbage, we produce would benefit the environment. A simple solution is to repair goods so that it lasts

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its maximum life, rather than dumping it. Excessive shopping leads to spending on unnecessary goods, which

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developing

nations, and it indicates that people of

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nation are satisfied with their standard of life, simultaneously there are other countries which are struggling with their daily necessities.

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, even wealthy nations have many homeless and people living in a derelict condition. Perhaps,

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of repeatedly purchasing similar and updating goods, wealthy individuals should start

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contributing

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and act responsibly. In conclusion, people are hooked to purchase the latest gadgets and devices which pleases them; but

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again it leads to spendthrift and has detrimental consequences of mushrooming rubbish. I believe that money should be spent on social development, and people should minimize the amount of scrap they throw out.