The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the results of a survey of the primary exercise objectives and locations of a selected group of adults between 20 and 50 years of age. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts illustrate the main goals and locations of

people

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aged between 20 and 50 reported by a survey. The bar chart provides details about the 5 main aims (recreation, muscle toning, weight loss, disease prevention and mood improvement) of working out,

whereas

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the pie chart shows percentages of 5 different locations for exercising.

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, the primary goal of

people

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doing exercise is to recover.

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, only a minority of

people

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reported

to get

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active to improve their mood or lose weight.

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, the most frequently visited location is the gym, but public venues, playgrounds and other places are

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quite popular with a combined percentage of over two

fifth

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. In terms of objectives, recreation is the main goal for two

fifth

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fifths

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of all

people

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while

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around

one quarter

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does sports to tone their muscles and define their body. Weight loss, disease prevention and mood improvement motivate

people

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the least, with all three aims ranging between 10 and around 14%.

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, the most popular location to sweat is the gym with 35%, followed by the park with 20% of

people

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going there. Public sports venues, playgrounds and other places are similar in popularity with 15% each.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "improvement" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

197 words

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