A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as human while others argue that human must employ animals to satisfy their needs, including use for food and research. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays there is a dramatic increase in the usage of animal to fulfil human needs. Some people claim that animals
also
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hold the same right to live, and
this
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is why human being should stop using them for their own wishes, while others argue that there is no alternative to the
use
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of animal for certain purposes like for consumption and essential scientific
experiements
the act of conducting a controlled test or investigation
experiments
experiment
.
This
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essay will discuss both views and will come up with the conclusion. Every living organism on
this
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earth have the same
previlege
a special advantage or immunity or benefit not enjoyed by all
privilege
privileges
to fight for the life. Animal serve various purposes which help other living
cretures
a living organism characterized by voluntary movement
creatures
in the
tremedous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
ways.
For instance
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, eggs from chicken used by the human for eating. Animals are speechless and
can not
can not
cannot
express their anger and dissatisfaction while they are being abused. If people continuously exploit animals for their own
needs
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needs, then
then
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in near future we may loss some important species of animal. So, it is the responsibility of people to be empathetic with the innocent beastly and protect them.
On the other hand
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, there are certain tasks which
requires
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require
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use
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the use
of animal,
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, as a mean of
research sample
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research samples
the research sample
. There are various scientific laboratories and pharmaceutical research centres which uses the rabbit or the mice to test the
effect
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effectiveness
of the certain drugs or methods on them, before implementing it on other living organism. For
situation
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situations
a situation
like
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, it is unavoidable to
use
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them because they
represents
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represent
similar
charactristcs
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristics
as human does.
Although
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, animal act as a useful mean in certain activities, I believe that we should respect their dignity to live and only
use
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them in the situation where there is no better alternative is available.
For example
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, one can avoid hunting wild creature just for the
habby
an auxiliary activity
hobby
, or people can
also
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switch to the other options for the food rather than killing aphonic creatures. To conclude, to save the precious
haritage
practices that are handed down from the past by tradition
heritage
of our animal
species human
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species, human
should move towards finding
better
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the best
good
resources to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their needs and respect the right of the speechless animals. They should only be
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use
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used
in the
circumstaces
your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)
circumstances
circumstance
where using other alternative may
leads
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lead
to worst impact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Ethical dilemmas
  • Animal rights
  • Welfare
  • Plant-based
  • Cultural practices
  • Legislation
  • Pharmaceuticals
  • Moral responsibility
  • Dominant species
  • Biomedical research
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Humane treatment
  • Sustainability
  • Conservation
  • Animal testing
  • Animal agriculture
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
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