Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Model

I disagree with the statement. Language is very important as it is the most important form of communication. Two people easily can understand and put across their thoughts. To decide whether a few languages are suffice or we need more languages is a debate by itself. In
this
essay we will talk about the statement's relevance in today's world. Easy life is least affected by languages. Every native speech is tied up with the identity of the race, culture and individual. In
this
world we have 195 countries and 6000 plus languages that are widely spoken.
For example
, in India alone, there are 22 dialects widely spoken.
Moreover
, each of these are associated with every state. In context to
this
Bengali is linked to the province West Bengal, Tamil is linked to the region Tamilnadu, Telugu is linked to the area Andhra Pradesh and so on.
Additionally
, every native speech is developing within the community.
Furthermore
, one cannot do away with
this
as it would equate to losing identities and stature in the society of the world.
However
, I feel fewer speeches and easy life, particularly has no correlation.
This
in fact is an amazing opportunity for people to learn new verses. Not only travelling can be exploited, but
also
learning new languages can be made a hobby. In general, the universe as
such
will become a better place to live with all the diversities. Another example of where the Minister of India wants to make Hindi as the official language in the country,
this
did not go too well with the mindset of the country.
Finally
, English should be the main language of the continent. Despite fewer languages, life will not be any easier.
Consequently
, the rest of the verses should be given equal respect and value. As a matter of fact, if a language dies, the culture goes along with it.
In other words
, let's not dilute the importance of the community speaking let all speeches exist.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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