A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It's
been a long time that the argues about the
animals
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animal
rights discussed in developed
nations but
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nations, but
recently
this
topic has opened
also
in developing countries.
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There
are two bands of animal lovers in
this
issue:
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A:
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see all of the universe as a body.
they
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They
can not
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form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
an animal in
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a cage
the cage
or even in an empty and quiet room lonely.
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about
these guys is that the animals are like the MAN.
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The
only difference between animal and human is
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accumulated knowledge or erudition or enlightenment
wisdom
and
cognition and
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cognition, and
these two important factors does not give
this
right to humans for captive the animals and using them for fun or any other stuff.
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At
this
point of
view all
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view, all
the creatures are free and the rights for all is equal. Group B:
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In
my opinion they are the protector guys.
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As
the sight of them, animals are free and the rights of an animal
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are
even more than a human because the animals can not to talk! The animals
can not
can not
cannot
protect themselves in recent
machinism
the atomic process that occurs during a chemical reaction
mechanism
world.
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They
need human support.
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this
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existing
existence
fans.
they
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They
say to
animals
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the animals
we protect you, we love you and we feed you and for
instead
we expect your love and your loyalty, your happiness and your peaceful eyes, back to us!
I respect to both
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I respect both
of these groups.
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They
are going to extend the humanity and kindness in tough recent world. But in
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the way
a way
ways
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
see these views,
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
am one of the B group! I feel, if the animals could talk to us, certainly they would say: Hey! Human!
lets
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Let's
Lets
go to love each other, to feed each other, to protect each other and build the funniest world
toghether
in contact with each other or in proximity
together
altogether
. The End

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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