International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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As a result

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of the continuous reduction in air transportation costs, countries all over the world are welcoming visitors to their territories.

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, in my opinion, will be highly beneficial to the

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country

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as it will enhance their international image as well as bring about additional revenue.

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, the harm that may emanate from

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an influx of people cannot be ignored. Admittedly, several

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harms

and damaging repercussions could come along allowing globetrotters on the soil of a

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, it can be an avenue for illicit and illegal transaction of businesses and conveyance of goods which could cause an increase in crime rate in the

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tourism

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could attract terrorists and other dangerous personalities into a

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country thereby

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country, thereby

threatening the safety and security of both nationals and non- nationals. Contrarily, benefits that accrue to hospitable cities are not

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far fetched

. One of

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is the creation of additional revenue for the

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has proven to be a lucrative business over the years, nations around the world strive to invest in

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line of business so they can increase their national revenue.

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tourism

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is usually a medium that helps fast track developmental growth in

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nations.

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, countries who welcome

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globe trotters

are given international recognition as they rank high on the list of best tourist cities

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adding positively to their image.

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, Dubai is one of the well known tourist cities which has magnificent structures that attract millions of people yearly

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contributing immensely to the national income. In conclusion, even though, positive international image and wealth creation are a few of the various merits of increased

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, the side-effects,

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influx

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the influx

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of terrorists and the smuggle of unlicensed goods are demerits that should be considered.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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