The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays health is becoming more important than ever, there is a strong focus on what people should eat, how many times and how long they have to exercise and the habits they should

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not saturated; capable of dissolving more of a substance at a given temperature

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to be healthier.

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, there's a huge scientific progress that allowed us to have a much longer and healthier

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life span

the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)

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. The impact that the progress in the field of medicine made affected greatly our

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life

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lives

, we now have new medications that before were absent or very expensive, it is enough to think that a person born in 1900 could expect to live more or less 50 years while now for

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a baby

born today blowing 100 candles is not utopic.

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was

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achieved

not only with the scientific progress but

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with

enhanced hygienic condition

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the enhanced hygienic condition

and a focus on

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newborn

mortality that was a huge problem in 19th and 20th centuries.

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, though our

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is heavily affected by technology that allows us to perform all the tasks sitting on our couch,

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means that we're living a more sedentary

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and obesity and all the issues that

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sickness bring are rising, mostly

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the western country. Another big problem is alimentation and pollution, in fact, most of the food we eat is highly processed with artificial agents or added sugars that are harmful for our bodies; pollution is

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rising dramatically and lung cancers have doubled in the

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50 years. In conclusion, even though

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disagree with the initial opinion, I believe that a culture of healthy

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life-style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

lifestyles

has to be installed in our

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can be achieved by starting from the school and making teens aware of the importance of exercise and healthy food.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?