The govt should make people take the responsibility for their actions to the environment. TO what extent do you agree?

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Environment

degradation

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Environmental

is very prominent issue in mordern era.

Government

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the modern era

modern era

and people both

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people, both

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the betterment

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the statement

ment share responsibility to public to protect our

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makes

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enhances

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a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

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, they increase frequency of

bus and

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the frequency

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mass transit

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Global warming

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the environment

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the greenhouse effect

greenhouse effect

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takes

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a large amount

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235 words

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The govt should make people take the responsibility for their actions to the environment. TO what extent do you agree?

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the one world due to the development of communication technology and transportation.

Children should be allowed to make decision on their own. Discuss bothe the views and give opinion.

Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7.Some people believe educational qualifications always bring success. Others think educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.