The govt should make people take the responsibility for their actions to the environment. TO what extent do you agree?

#govt #people #responsibility #actions #environment

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Environmental

is very prominent issue in mordern era.

Government

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the modern era

modern era

and people both

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a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

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The govt should make people take the responsibility for their actions to the environment. TO what extent do you agree?

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