Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for the charity, teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that voluntary
work
such
as community work
and educating younger children about games should be mandatory in the secondary school
curriculum system. This
essay agrees with this
view of implementing free work
to the high school
outline because it will teach students to be responsible, to be a valuable contributor in society and it will help them for
their Suggestion
in
farther
advancement.
Education should not be limited to only academic to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
purposes but
Accept comma addition
purposes, but
also
to practical skills. Community work
such
as working for charities and teaching sports to
kids are Suggestion
for
also
very important as they have the ability to teach high schoolers invaluable communication and interaction skills. Community work
helps students connect with their local people and to become responsible citizens. For example
, when I was a student in higher secondary school
at that time, I used to clean our school
surroundings as voluntary work
. This
skill helped me later on in my life as I’ve been able to keep my neighbourhood clean. Therefore
, I believe that free work
at school
is very essential for students as they are able to acquire practical skills that are not taught in a classroom setting.
Another important benefit is the acquired experience. Many colleges and universities also
look for this
kind of experience. A lot of students leave high school
with volunteer work
and charitable work
on their CV and that greatly helps them stand out in the huge pool of prospective university applicants. For example
, top universities such
as MIT, Oxford and Cambridge receive thousands of applications with top marks every year and they merely accept a small number of applicants. The extracurricular activities on a student’s application could certainly make the difference between acceptance and rejection.
In conclusion, I believe that volunteerism
and charitable tell voluntarily
volunteers
work
should be mandatory in secondary school
. This
essay totally agrees with the implementation of such
a curriculum because of the benefits it brings to society and the practical experience the students gain that will help them in the future.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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