In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study in the same city, whereas, in other countries they live away from home while they study in another city. Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In some communities, it is
costumary
in accordance with convention or custom
customary
for
collage
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
students
to stay
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staying
at home and study in
near by
close at hand
nearby
universities. In other
others
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others, however
however
, it is common for children to go and study in distant cities, and live by themselves.
Although
living alone might lead to higher financial expenses, the secondary
indipendence
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
Independence
gained from
such
a decision is far better. Studying and living in a distant city may be very demanding financially. Aside from paying the monthly rent, other house expenses
such
as
elctricity
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
and water taxes increase the student's financial burden.
Furthermore
, in the absence of other family members, which can assist in the daily
activites
any specific behavior
activities
, many students use the help of cleaning service or take-away food which
increase
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increases
the
mothly
of or occurring or payable every month
monthly
expenses even more.
Thie
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The
financial consequences of living alone while studying was reported
last
year by the Americal education board, and was estimated to be 150% higher in
comparrison
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to students how stay at home while studying. And yet, despite the above mentioned, living away from our families is substantially better due to the feeling of
indipendence
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
Independence
we achieve. Being alone requires us to face and solve issues we did not
encouter
come together
encounter
yet,
such
as a leaky roof, or a broken bed.
As a
result we
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result, we
mature and learn how to address and solve new problems by
our selves
reflexive form of "us"
ourselves
, and learn to overcome our fears. To illustrate, based on the statistics of the Israeli educational office, students who lived alone during their studies are three times more likely to seek jobs abroad and, as a consequence, earn
higher salary
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higher salaries
a higher salary
in
comparisson
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to others. To conclude, living away during our university might be very expensive and financially demanding. Despite that, the
indiendance
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
gained by living alone is much more important, and will assist us enormously later in our lives.

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