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Some people believe that team sports are very important for children to succeed in their career, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 believed that
team
 sports
builds
Suggestion
build
 cooperation amongst kids and is vital for
career
 growth. Others say that children ought to be competitive for them to accomplish their goals. I believe that children should be subjected to experience the two so as to fit into any situation they find themselves.
First
 of all,
team
 sports
improves
Suggestion
improve
 a
childs
Suggestion
child's
 ability to cooperate with fellow teammates. Through cooperative sports, he learns from fellow teammates.
For instance
, in
team
 games, children come together to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
 a set goal, everyone is willing to learn from the best person in the group, ideas are being shared for the purpose of winning.
As a result
, cooperative skill is learnt which
also
 comes handy in
career
 accomplishments unlike a child is competitive.
On the other hand
, when a child competes alone, a high level of confidence is displayed. Children do their best when placed to compete against other kids.
This
 builds their level of confidence and encourages them to put in
there
of them or themselves
their
 best. To clarify, the spirit of competition prepared them for their
career
Suggestion
careers
 knowing that they have to work hard to be on top. So, much energy and
confidenceis
Suggestion
confidence is
 displayed when children are competitive and
this
 makes them to succeed in their skills. In conclusion, as peoples opinions vary, it is believed that children should be encouraged to participate in
team
 sports as well as competitive sports because both is essential to progress in
career
.
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