Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sports has always entertained and influenced our lives
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and it said that sports tier earn more
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that it is fair
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of fact sports celebrities should be given an average or more than average
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however, it
will be best to give consideration to other professions too.
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sports has
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created
dreams for children and goals for adult.
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which has forced indirectly our future generations
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children and youth) mostly indoors.
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result, they
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a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
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which could be dangerous in
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the future
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a role model for them with high fame and fortune
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could be a stimulation for active and hard working
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
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For instance
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and thousand of choices to waste your time
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should be given credit. If an athlete works hard in his precious time of the year
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youth)
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it will justify
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that he earns more
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I argue that other
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a person engaged in one of the learned professions
professionals
should be given preference
too
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to
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scientists
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even sports and movie stars are made in classrooms.
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professions that benefit mankind
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does not receive
nearly as much attention or
money
but remains essential to society.
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those who put their lives in
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danger
to save other lives and their country
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as Doctors
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firefighters, and soldiers
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If state, gives preference to these professions as much as sports celebrities, we might get more Doctors
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teachers soldiers
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even more sports celebrities. To conclude
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a result
of hard working
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athletes should be given average or little more than average
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however, other
professions should
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be given exactly the same amount of
money
as sports stars.
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