Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

situations
Suggestion
Situations
are changing may be day by day. Some individuals consider that it is better to accept difficult conditions
such
as scarcity of money or unpleasant
job
while opponents claim that make some efforts to improve the situation.
This
essay will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
both views. On the one hand, it is true that some persons believe that
job
Suggestion
a job
the job
is necessary than cheerful working environment. If a person
have
Suggestion
has
is having
job
security than its satisfaction is not essential.
In addition
, people think that accept the situation as it is and live content. It is better for one's health and mind
that dont
Accept comma addition
that, don't
that don't
be
feel
Suggestion
feeling
frustration.
On the other hand
,
alternative view
Suggestion
the alternative view
an alternative view
is that there are various up and down comes in life but
dont
do not
don't
give up in bad situations.
satisfactory
Suggestion
Satisfactory
job
is more imperative than
permanent but
Accept comma addition
permanent, but
unsatisfactory work. Hard work is stepping stone to accomplish goal.
Instead
of sitting
free
a fixed charge for a privilege or for professional services
fee
,
Accept space
,
individuals
needs
Suggestion
need
to
do
engage in
make
efforts for
better lifestyle
Suggestion
a better lifestyle
.
For instance
, Barrack Obama did many struggles in life to become a prime minister of
USA
Suggestion
the USA
. So everyone
have
Suggestion
has
potential to achieve success
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
, in conclusion it can be said that hard work is key to success. It is crucial to confront hard time for good future.
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