Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.

It has been often observed and noted that the trend of shopping is widespread within a time. Certain people put extra

interest

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interested

in purchasing brand new technical equipment. If questioned,

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that

it

it is

it's

productive type trend

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a productive type trend

. All aspects are discussed

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. Excessive shopping leads to spending on unnecessary goods, which

s

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

is

mostly spotted in

developed

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developing

nations, and it indicates that people of

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nation are satisfied with their standard of life, simultaneously there are other countries which are struggling with their daily necessities.

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, even wealthy nations have many homeless and people living in a derelict condition. Perhaps,

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of repeatedly purchasing similar and updating goods, wealthy individuals should start

to contribute

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contributing

towards social

upliftment

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and act responsibly. By purchasing new devices, individuals discard the old items into

trash

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the trash

, which eventually ends up in a landfill site. Landfill sites are full of non-recyclable and toxic matter that can harm flora and fauna;

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, the more amount of careless disposing of

components

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the components

leads to a disturbing fact of destroying

eco-system

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the eco - system

.

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, according to the Times survey report, around 90 per cent of animals, habitat is affected by the dumping grounds.

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Therefore minimizing

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Therefore, minimizing

the garbage, we produce would benefit the environment. A simple solution is to repair goods so that it lasts

to

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for

its maximum life, rather than dumping it. In conclusion, people are hooked to purchase the latest gadgets and devices which pleases them; but

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again it leads to spendthrift and has detrimental consequences of mushrooming rubbish. I believe that money should be spent on social development, and people should minimize the amount of scrap they throw out.