Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. • What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? • What solutions can you suggest?

We all know that God created different spices to maintain the world’ ecosystem. Despite of above thought human
beings
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beings'
being
activities leads to
disappearance
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the disappearance
of many spices and
loss
of bio-diversity.
This
essay will discuss the primary causes and possible solutions to Control it. Two primary causes of it are deforestation and over exploitation of natural resources. In order to improve the architecture of cities we are cutting down the forests by doing so we are destroying the animal’s habitat. Natural resources like reservoir, mountains and glaciers have been over exploited in
last
decades which
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decades, which
result in inhabitable conditions for many animal
spices
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
and plants.
Recent
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Recently
, research for university of Arizona shows that almost 60% variety of plants and 30% of animal
spices
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
has been lost due to deforestation and shrinking of natural resources.
Overall these
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Overall, these
major factors are not only reasons behind the
loss
of
bio diversity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
as well may lead to human destruction in
near future
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the near future
. In order to control
loss
of bio-diversity and animal
spices
(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed
species
, people should not only be aware with different awareness programs but
also
encourage for plantation. With human awareness program, certainly human must be aware with limited uses of natural resources and
also
contribute in saving the nature. Plantation is must
require
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required
as it’s a shelter for animals. Government of India
have set
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has set
up numerous of programs for making people aware how to increase plantation and
limitation
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the limitation
limitations
of natural resources. Every animal and
plant whether
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plant, whether
it’s terrestrial or aquatic
is
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are
a part of
world’s ecosystems
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the world’s ecosystems
and must to protect for maintaining ecosystems
lifecycle
.
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.
This
essay discussed about the reasons and possible solutions for
loss
of bio-diversity and disappearance on spices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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