Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. • What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? • What solutions can you suggest?

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We all know that God created different spices to maintain the world’ ecosystem. Despite of above thought human

beings

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beings'

being

activities leads to

disappearance

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the disappearance

of many spices and

loss

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of bio-diversity.

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essay will discuss the primary causes and possible solutions to Control it. Two primary causes of it are deforestation and over exploitation of natural resources. In order to improve the architecture of cities we are cutting down the forests by doing so we are destroying the animal’s habitat. Natural resources like reservoir, mountains and glaciers have been over exploited in

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decades which

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decades, which

result in inhabitable conditions for many animal

spices

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

and plants.

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Recently

, research for university of Arizona shows that almost 60% variety of plants and 30% of animal

spices

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

has been lost due to deforestation and shrinking of natural resources.

Overall these

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Overall, these

major factors are not only reasons behind the

loss

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bio diversity

the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)

biodiversity

as well may lead to human destruction in

near future

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the near future

. In order to control

loss

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of bio-diversity and animal

spices

(biology) taxonomic group whose members can interbreed

species

, people should not only be aware with different awareness programs but

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encourage for plantation. With human awareness program, certainly human must be aware with limited uses of natural resources and

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contribute in saving the nature. Plantation is must

require

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required

as it’s a shelter for animals. Government of India

have set

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has set

up numerous of programs for making people aware how to increase plantation and

limitation

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the limitation

limitations

of natural resources. Every animal and

plant whether

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plant, whether

it’s terrestrial or aquatic

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are

a part of

world’s ecosystems

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the world’s ecosystems

and must to protect for maintaining ecosystems

lifecycle

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essay discussed about the reasons and possible solutions for

loss

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of bio-diversity and disappearance on spices.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

habitat destruction
deforestation
urbanization
overexploitation
climate change
pollution
invasive species
conservation
sustainable practices
greenhouse gas emissions
ecosystems
species population
genetic diversity
environmental awareness
protected areas

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