Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A certain group of people

are

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is

of the opinion that

music

is a better way of integrating diverse cultures and different age groups. Overall, I would

opined

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opine

that while

this

is true, we must bear in mind the demerits of

this

view.

Firstly

, opponents of

such

a view believe that

majority

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the majority

of songs that youngsters are listening to today are full of obscene pictures and videos which is unpleasant for them.

For example

, it is a common knowledge in Nigeria homes for children not to listen to songs by Rihanna (an American musician)

bacause

for the reason that; on account of

because

of nudity she displayed in her videos.

This

has created a barrier to songs from the United State of America and Nigerians are even conscious of Americans. More

over

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Over

, certain tracks can generate hatred for some selected few. Take for an instance, some traditional singers in a bid to make public awareness about a pressing issue, are often in the habit of directly or indirectly antagonizing authorities.

This

reminds me of a popular Nigeria musician called

Davido who

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David, who

David who

opposed the government of Nigeria and supported the political ambition of his uncle. The effect of

this

was that it created

aminosity

a feeling of ill will arousing active hostility

animosity

among

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between

the political parties in Nigeria rather than uniting them.

Although

songs

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the songs

are good, if

targetted

a reference point to shoot at

targeted

against some cultures or age groups can result in war.

On the other hand

,

music

has a way of uniting people of different background and ages through organized party, concerts or travelling to another country to participate in

music

festivals. A yearly musical event is normally held in Israel and the participants included people from the middle East, Americans, Africans and majority Asians. Through songs they listened to, it has changed some of their views about Israel. Some now see that Israel citizens are

peaceful

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more peaceful

rather than being cruel because of wars they experience yearly. It is worthy of note that when properly channelled,

music

can even bring an end to wars that we are experiencing in different parts of the world. In conclusion, I would

opined

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opine

that on balance, while

music

can unite nations and different age category, it can

also

result in disunity if it is not monitored. I

however

believe that the benefits of

this

outweigh the drawbacks.